Happy Women’s Day
You call me an enigma
You think nothing can describe me
You say we can’t understand you
You always think I am a dilemma
And…
I think you are a supreme fool
I think you have never tried to understand me
I think you probably try sometime
I think you always feel you are here to rule
Then…
The togetherness dissolve sometimes
You say I am the only one who compromise
If I stand up to walk away
Your brain starts churning the words to play
If…
I tell you are weak without me
I ask you to kneel down before me
I command you to feel the pain I go through
Only once you use your heart to see
But…
I am nothing without you
You agitate me as much as I do
I will always ask
Why dawn always melt into dusk
I am a woman because you make me one
In this battlefield called life, without you I couldn’t have won
You say you like me with all my complexities
But I say I look up to you because of all your audacities…
actually felt like that ws a wishing “happy woman’s day”….rather that a “happy girls day” that i have been hearin from the morning.:)
love u all the more.
Wow…that was excellent… I was bowled by the turn it took in the end…and what a perspective… Happy Women’s Day girl
My fav part – “I look up to you because of all your audacities”
Suggestion: Try using ‘for’ instead of ‘because of’ n see how it sounds..
@Sanjukta yeah I tried that but felt the feeling was not accentuating properly hence the usage. Will surely append next time. Thanks dost! you have always been a help.
Loov-lee … not your best, but very “today”. I love the first verse. You’ll watch out for my mail, won’t ya?
Interesting narrative style dost !! Will start reading ur posts from now on!
Very Nice. happy women’s day…
Liked the general feel of it….occasionally it felt as if the “sacrificing” nature of the woman was being projected more….but at the end everything squared up – you love us with our complexities, we love you with (or is it “inspite”??) all your audacities.